Friday, November 25, 2011

wedding poem?

i don't know why people think i can just sit down chose a subject and write a magnificent poem... i only write what i feel or what i know... i cant write about a love that isn't mine... but i have till tonight to write a poem for my sisters wedding... i am scared... if i don't do it she will be mad and she will most likely think i didn't try... ahhhhgggg!!!! i hate writing things happy... it just does not work almost 85% of my poems are dark or depressing... i just don't know what to do... well this is what i have though i don't like this but it might just have to do...

wedding poem
a troubled teen 
a wounded soul
all she wanted was to let go
he came in
 her shooting star
soon she knew
 he would never be far
in their hearts love grew so steadily
it seemed holding on
 would be the only remedy
now we speed ahead
she is walking down the isle
he cant hide his smile 
all eyes a bright 
and filled with tears of joy
 ready to proclaim their love
on this never to be forgotten night
knowing that from here on out
 they will never be truly apart
they grasp each others hands 
and know they are ready
 to spend the rest of their life
together...

please comment! tell me if this is good

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